The Coach Drivers Neck
Sore
vinegary
pock marked
bulging
spewing out of
a greasy burgundy blazer
The Coach Drivers Neck
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Re: The Coach Drivers Neck
by Saturn » Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:59 pm
Nice little vignette there bulbus, very succint.
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Re: The Coach Drivers Neck
by dks » Fri Aug 06, 2010 4:20 am
I like that! ...has a William Carlos Williams feel...
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