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PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:05 am
by Saturn

You have a wonderful way of putting things.

That's such a great image 'a heavy Keats habit' :lol:

PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:07 am
by Kaki
Richard, you make him sound like a show off. Course, anyone can write with structure if they want to. If you put a poem into a structure you really have to get to the heart of what you want to say so that you can express your thoughts within a structure clearly. Keats knew what he wanted to say, and the beauty lies in how he was able to convey his thoughts and feelings within a very strict structure yet maintain the original poetic thought process. I have a giddy, girlish poem I wrote in rhyme if you'd like me to post it. I did write it a year ago so it isn't structured "well", but there is a rhyme scheme.

PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:25 am
by Papillon
Well, I don't know about Richard, but I would love to see Kaki's attempt at being a giddy girl! :)

PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 12:49 am
by Kaki
Fine I'll go dig it up... :roll: