'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

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'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

Postby ChildofWoz » Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:21 am

I am truly afraid to no longer be
Content in my own misery;
That there is no heaven nor no hell,
No place for the lost souls to dwell,
Doth break fearsome Moros' chain,
Wreaking havoc, bringing pain.
Love hath no memory, say so, dear,
Let loose the wretched tendrils of fear
To wreak the havoc of destiny
And banish heaven of her myst'ry.

ALW, 3/16/2011
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Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

Postby Fragment » Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:10 pm

Powerful piece, especially having it in just one stanza. I like "Let loose the wretched tendrils of fear" -Nice work
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Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

Postby ChildofWoz » Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:13 pm

Fragment wrote:Powerful piece, especially having it in just one stanza. I like "Let loose the wretched tendrils of fear" -Nice work


Thank you, I really appreciate the positive feedback.
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Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

Postby Raphael » Mon Apr 18, 2011 10:49 pm

I find the rhythm to be very smooth and the expression quite powerful- well done Child of Woz.
John....you did not live to see-
who we are because of what you left,
what it is we are in what we make of you.

Peter Sanson, 1995.
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Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

Postby ChildofWoz » Fri Apr 22, 2011 9:32 pm

Raphael wrote:I find the rhythm to be very smooth and the expression quite powerful- well done Child of Woz.

Thank you kindly, it means much to me.
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