Two doves

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Two doves

Postby Pjerrot » Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:00 am

I saw two doves
together
on the ground
trying to find
peace
in search of
harmony
a dream
Ah! I will taste that dew, for me ’tis meet,/And when the moon her pallid face discloses,/I’ll gather some by spells, and incantation.
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Re: Two doves

Postby Fragment » Tue Apr 05, 2011 11:48 pm

I'm normally not one for short poems, but I find this one rather intriguing.

I like how the flow goes from "together" to "on the ground". Both lines have 3 syllables, but they feel in a way similar and different. They are hard sounding words and they feel rushed compared to the rest of the poem.
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