The Alliance Between The Dream Keeper and I

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The Alliance Between The Dream Keeper and I

Postby Fragment » Sat May 07, 2011 11:31 pm

The Alliance Between The Dream Keeper and I
G. Collins, 2.27.2010




Out of whims, I will walk on home
Whereas I will wander, I will roam

Sleep forever, creaking, closing mind
Invite the Lord of Darkness to intertwine

Within dreams, quivering finger seeks electrical socket
Amplify thine own wailing, weeping thoughts

Join me as an ally; in the Dream Keeper I confide
Be thine on a journey of tireless words, my guide

Before this farewell, this departure
Tune my intellect into a breathing overture

After I’ve left the real
Before I’ve reached the beyond

Standing at the lair where only time has trod
I bid your guard through the boggy mists of it’s facade
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Re: The Alliance Between The Dream Keeper and I

Postby WolfLarsen » Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:14 am

This poem is powerful and well written, besides having a good rhythm, which is essential to any good poem.
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