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Winter nest

PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2012 12:16 pm
by Saturn
Winter nest

You are my Winter's nest,
My sweet Summer's rest,
My falling Autumn leaves,
And budding Spring eves,
My night and every day,
My early morning grey
My hope, and my breath,
My birth and my death.
All I ever wish to be
Is one and all to thee.
_________

Re: Winter nest

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2012 5:07 pm
by steffen
So beautiful and moving in its simplicity -all in just ten lines and in between the rythm and the rhyme.

Re: Winter nest

PostPosted: Tue Nov 13, 2012 5:13 pm
by Saturn
Thanks for the kind words steffen, it was intended to be short, sing-song like, almost like a lullaby.

Re: Winter nest

PostPosted: Wed Nov 14, 2012 5:21 pm
by marwood
I agree Saturn, lovely.
Take care.

Re: Winter nest

PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 2:14 am
by Raphael
I like that Saturn. The idea of safe nests is sweet. I am very fond of birds and many birds are very caring to their young.