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The adventures of Sarsaparilla

PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:04 pm
by Kaki
Sorry...

PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:29 pm
by darthoutis
Nice exercise in alliteration! It's a little distracting, though (just a little bit).

It reminds me of an early work of William Blake's...An Island in the Moon--yes, that's it!

1st Voice: "Want Matches?"
2nd Voice: "Yes, yes, yes."
1st Voice: "Want Matches?"
2nd Voice: "No."

1st Voice: "Want Matches?"
2nd Voice: "Yes, yes, yes."
1st Voice: "Want Matches?"
2nd Voice: "No."

Hehehehe.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 11:23 pm
by Saturn
That's the most alliteration I've ever seen :shock:

PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 5:42 pm
by Kaki
As an old Friend of mine use to say: "Behold the fruits of my boredom!" If I didn't occasionaly write this nonsense I would go quite insane. Of course I am insane so it would be a different type of insanity. The bad kind it would be I think... I don't feel like elaborating.

And I agree it is a bit distracting, but it wasn't really meant to mean anything, I just wanted to inspire a few laughs and a smile here and there even if no one understood...

PostPosted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 3:32 pm
by Saturn
Kaki wrote:And I agree it is a bit distracting, but it wasn't really meant to mean anything, I just wanted to inspire a few laughs and a smile here and there even if no one understood...


It made me smile and that's not a little thing.

There's room for all types of verse here.

PostPosted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 10:51 pm
by Kaki
Saturn wrote:
It made me smile and that's not a little thing.



Yay! :D

I'm thinking of doing a whole series, always open for suggestions.