JUST SEE (something a bit different)

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JUST SEE (something a bit different)

Postby Matt » Wed Jun 16, 2004 12:51 am

Everyones been talking about a cultural rennaisance. I don't know what this is or even what its like but it came from somewhere deep. Ha Ha....Geez. Let me know what ya think.


All I wanted to do
Was write just one beautiful love song
For you.
But as usual, nothing comes
Of something.
One silly idea in my silly head
Becomes nothing.
'Until next time', I once said.
How many 'next times' will there be?
Before you admit/realise/enjoy
The way that you feel for me.
Don't worry.
Even though you stare
(Or at least it seems you do)
I'll walk on, ignoring, 'unaware',
And in some sad hope,
That one day
You'll cry out for me,
And admit that what we have is eternity
And lovely
And special
And Unique
And dear
And-Oh! Help me!
Please (I beg you)
See. Thats all I ask. Just See.

Well, that was that. I'd love to know what people think. I am a regular on the forum-not a time waster!


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You've been busy!!

Postby Saturn » Wed Jun 16, 2004 10:58 pm

The Muse has obviously been whispering in your ear today Matt.

Great to see someone so enthusiastic about posting on this forum.

Keep up the good work!
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