Winter Hearts

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Winter Hearts

Postby Saturn » Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:11 pm

Winter Hearts

Winter lovers feel a chill,
Winter hearts beating still
Muffled speech seems shrill.

Winter lovers take hands,
Winter hearts in strands
Woven for warmer lands.

Winter lovers feel a heat
Winter hearts will be greet
By love, a passion discrete.

Winter lovers keep near
Winter hearts can hear
Spring's ripening cheer.
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"Oh what a misery it is to have an intellect in splints".
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Re: Winter Hearts

Postby jamiano » Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:16 am

The last 3 verses of this poem are sincere and dearly expressed; to the point, with tenderness.

peace to love,


jamiano


p.s. I will post soon. As always, be a poesy strong.
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Re: Winter Hearts

Postby Saturn » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:15 pm

Thank you friend jamiano, your kind words are always appreciated.
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Re: Winter Hearts

Postby zebluepenguin » Fri Mar 13, 2009 4:23 am

Brrr! Its cold! But there is still hope. Not just lovers can feel hope.(I feel hopeful about my exam results right now) :mrgreen:
" Heard melodies are sweet. But those unheard are sweeter." -Keats
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