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In the Spirit of "Sensation"

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 1:46 am
by dks
Here ya'll go...


The Biology of a Poem


The mash is always churning,
The clotted honey sipped and chewed.

The batter is always burning,
While the nectar-milk is brewed.

The syrup in the pollen spray
Curdles and creams sugar-white
Today—

It may take hours
To get the bee bread
Sweetened just right.

Its waiting
For the tasting.

Cap the cells,
Fan the hive,
Wax the combing glue!

Hurry up—
Before it overruns!
This one’s done,
Too.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 4:44 am
by Credo Buffa
Such "sweet" language. . . my teeth are tingling just reading it :lol:

I love the rhyme scheme in particular :D

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 5:02 am
by dks
Credo Buffa wrote:Such "sweet" language. . . my teeth are tingling just reading it :lol:

I love the rhyme scheme in particular :D


Thank you, miss Credo! I have been emersed in sensation today... :wink:

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:20 pm
by Saturn
"O for a life of senstaions rather than thoughts!" :wink:

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 5:19 am
by dks
Saturn wrote:"O for a life of senstaions rather than thoughts!" :wink:


And ho!! I say scream it from the mountian tops--or from your front porch...whichever is in reach! :wink:

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 9:02 am
by Saturn
It's my personal motto :D

I have too many thoughts, not enough physical sensation :?

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 2:31 pm
by dks
Saturn wrote:It's my personal motto :D

I have too many thoughts, not enough physical sensation :?


ooooh, boy. Let's not get Denise started on that subject...for I am victim of a passionate nature-- :?