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My World Issue Piece

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:06 am
by dks
Just finished this one, gang, if you have time to take a gander...

The Griffon

The avid, dune fishing
Griffon
Lands and cranes
His sinuous neck,
And surveys
With a scanning eye.

Hot in the curling
Horn,
His crooked bill
Bakes dry.

His neck ruff
Still teems
From a shallow well.
Ambling, craving
He cocks the strike—

On the Somali lamb
Rawboned, buckled,
And alone to die.

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 9:48 pm
by Saturn
Your fertile imagination and poetic vision astonish me more and more each day Denise.

You really have to get some of this stuff published :shock:

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 12:25 am
by dks
Saturn wrote:Your fertile imagination and poetic vision astonish me more and more each day Denise.

You really have to get some of this stuff published :shock:


Your flattery is pretty much enough and what I live for--don't you know that, Stephen?? :lol: :wink:

I don't know the first thing about going on and getting 'published'--don't know who exactly to submit my manuscripts to. :? :?:

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 9:52 am
by Saturn
Either do I but someone must know :?

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 2:12 pm
by dks
Saturn wrote:Either do I but someone must know :?


I'll do some research on that. Malia had given me some helpful tips on how to get started--if I publish some fledgling volume, I do hope you all would buy it--help my cause!! :lol: :lol:

PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 11:02 pm
by Saturn
:shock: Of course - if it's possible for me to do it I will :shock:

PostPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 3:18 am
by dks
Saturn wrote::shock: Of course - if it's possible for me to do it I will :shock:


Stephen, Stephen, Stephen! Thank you for your words of encourgement... :wink: