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"Free"--final, edited version

PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 5:02 am
by dks
Also an edit here. Just sharing the poetic process--if that's what you'd call it. :wink: :lol:


I’m going to break
Out of this block,
If it takes
All the time
I’ve ever known.

And if all I leave with
Are my busted irons
And broken nails
With rebar,
Blood and skin;

Still, I’ll walk free.
No more dumbstruck
Begging of you, jailer,
On my waled, tender

Soon, I’ll be out.
Where the only thought
catching me
Is the Autumn Royal
Grape scent
Of swollen laurel seeds
blooming on the breeze.

PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 1:16 pm
by Saturn
Its better to be alone than in a bad relationship I suppose.

By the way what does rebar mean :?:

Is it re-bar as in to re-inter behind bars?

PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 3:06 pm
by dks
Sorry- :oops:

Rebar is a type of reinforced concrete.

PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 9:34 pm
by Saturn
No I'm sorry I tried to search on and I couldn't find a meaning.

Must be a local product.

PostPosted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:35 am
by dks