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Ah, it's like a high when I finish one...

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:34 am
by dks
I wanted to share. I just finished it not a moment ago...there's a glint of an allusion here.

Warm and Alive

My hand is warm and alive,
And almost fain,
This fulgent band
Still crushes close joy.

It will drop loose, fan freely,
Spreading tips to touch you
Again and again—
Full swell
In the moon’s
Secret summer shade.

You, and only you
Made me know
How diaphanous and divine
It truly is
To soften so much frozen earth
Under chilling years of girdled snow.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:18 am
by Saturn
'Tis a beauty as always Denise :D

Another of your pearls carelessly dropped in our way.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:10 pm
by dks
Saturn wrote:'Tis a beauty as always Denise :D

Another of your pearls carelessly dropped in our way.


I'm a sponge to your flattery.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:22 am
by Richard
Is it something to do with a wedding ring ? Glistening as freshly wrought.
I needed a dictionary, English tutor.
'The High'. From a male standpoint is akin to giving birth while finishing a 3D crossword.



yet again I fail to communicate effectively due to the errant emoticons

Richard

PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:01 pm
by dks
Yes...a ring...good analysis.

You and those bum-rushing emoticons, Richard! :lol: