a hope within a sigh never dies

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a hope within a sigh never dies

Postby jamiano » Fri Aug 29, 2008 11:37 pm

a hope within a sigh never dies,
as the seas transcend into the air

a hope within a sigh never dies,
as the mountains reach to the stars

a hope within a sigh never dies,
as a memory of the kiss

a hope within a sigh never dies,
as a lover discovers peace

a hope within a sigh never dies,
as a wish born to keep joy alive

peace to love,

jamiano


p.s. Today, somewhere between the bluebery wine and the raspberry champagne, this
poesy awakened the joy within me. Hello and peace to everyone.
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Re: a hope within a sigh never dies

Postby AsphodelElysium » Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:44 am

Quite lovely, thank you so much for sharing!
"Let me not wander in a barren dream,
But, when I am consumed in the fire,
Give me new Phoenix wings to fly at my desire."
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Re: a hope within a sigh never dies

Postby adonais » Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:47 am

Singular! I can't say it's a great poem, but the first line is a poem of great feeling all by itself! It's like one of those that you can just keep thinking about forever without hitting the bottom :)
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a hope within a sigh never dies

Postby jamiano » Sun Sep 07, 2008 3:03 pm

A hope within a sigh never dies,

As a wish born to keep joy alive,,,,




Thank you for your dear comments.


Each thread of praise, weaves me further into the epic.


Meanwhile, I excite by the themes of "Lamia".



peace to love,
jamiano
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