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random freeflow...

Postby SidewalkProphet » Sun Sep 21, 2008 5:37 pm

Music.

Each note a heartfelt memory
Each rise and fall remembers
Those moments gone but longed for still
Like gently burning embers

The melody a time machine
Transports on a refrain
To times and places long ago
Like puddles in the rain.
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Re: random freeflow...

Postby adonais » Mon Sep 22, 2008 2:59 pm

I like this. I don't know if you are a musician, but I think you eminently put into words thoughts and feelings that course through composers in their creative striving; reminiscence, meanderings and explorations. Subtle rhyming as well, very nice.
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