In the Spirit of "Sensation"

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In the Spirit of "Sensation"

Postby dks » Thu Apr 27, 2006 1:46 am

Here ya'll go...


The Biology of a Poem


The mash is always churning,
The clotted honey sipped and chewed.

The batter is always burning,
While the nectar-milk is brewed.

The syrup in the pollen spray
Curdles and creams sugar-white
Today—

It may take hours
To get the bee bread
Sweetened just right.

Its waiting
For the tasting.

Cap the cells,
Fan the hive,
Wax the combing glue!

Hurry up—
Before it overruns!
This one’s done,
Too.
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Postby Credo Buffa » Thu Apr 27, 2006 4:44 am

Such "sweet" language. . . my teeth are tingling just reading it :lol:

I love the rhyme scheme in particular :D
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Postby dks » Thu Apr 27, 2006 5:02 am

Credo Buffa wrote:Such "sweet" language. . . my teeth are tingling just reading it :lol:

I love the rhyme scheme in particular :D


Thank you, miss Credo! I have been emersed in sensation today... :wink:
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Postby Saturn » Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:20 pm

"O for a life of senstaions rather than thoughts!" :wink:
"Oh what a misery it is to have an intellect in splints".
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Postby dks » Fri Apr 28, 2006 5:19 am

Saturn wrote:"O for a life of senstaions rather than thoughts!" :wink:


And ho!! I say scream it from the mountian tops--or from your front porch...whichever is in reach! :wink:
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Postby Saturn » Fri Apr 28, 2006 9:02 am

It's my personal motto :D

I have too many thoughts, not enough physical sensation :?
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Postby dks » Fri Apr 28, 2006 2:31 pm

Saturn wrote:It's my personal motto :D

I have too many thoughts, not enough physical sensation :?


ooooh, boy. Let's not get Denise started on that subject...for I am victim of a passionate nature-- :?
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