"Marionnette"--an edited and final version

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"Marionnette"--an edited and final version

Postby dks » Thu Jul 13, 2006 7:30 pm

Just sharing my edited and final version of a poem I posted a few days back. :) This is yet another one of Denise's metaphoric statements about love. :roll:

Marionnette

I swear
You negotiate
The environment
Like a breeze.

Your hands rove
Like a magician’s,
Plying over
One another so cursively,
So they seem lissomely
Independent from you.

Hardly a word uttered,
A virtuosic mime,
Every move buttered,
Choreographed deftly,
In time—

I toddle and fling
About,
A consort on wooden lathes,
Held surely and tight
By good seine twine,
And you.
Last edited by dks on Thu Jul 20, 2006 6:20 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Postby Saturn » Thu Jul 13, 2006 9:36 pm

WILL YOU PLEASE STOP APOLOGISING FOR YOUR WORK!!!!!!!!! :roll:

We love it and want you to post more.

If I was sick of it I would tell you.

This is what this section is for, posting your poems :roll:

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Postby dks » Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:32 am

:?

Are you yelling at me, young man??

Alright, already. I'll post until you all spew. :?
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Postby Saturn » Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:07 am

I wasn't shouting :oops:
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Postby dks » Fri Jul 14, 2006 2:54 pm

Shout at me. I probably need it, Saturn. :lol:
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