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Where to put our own poems online for review.

Postby jfk » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:24 pm

Hi all,

I am interested to know if anyone can tell me where I can post my own poetry online in order to have it reviewed by anyone who cares to read it!

Thanks for any help.
A beacon in the starry sky, this man so dazzling
did not fly from here in a chariot of gold,
but left our world on a melancholic wing
and fled the sorrow that makes men old.
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Postby Golyadkin » Wed Apr 07, 2004 1:02 am

I see no problem with posting it here.
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A poem to keats.

Postby jfk » Wed Apr 07, 2004 7:08 pm

The beautiful figure of a hurried hand,
scribbling notes on tide-washed sand.
Barely perceiving the wonder that flows,
from ripened brain in teeming blows.

His genius fresh, his time near come,
The man, the flesh, did to death succumb.
Our terrible loss was heaven’s joy
The beauty he left: Let no man destroy.


Any comments...seriously.
A beacon in the starry sky, this man so dazzling
did not fly from here in a chariot of gold,
but left our world on a melancholic wing
and fled the sorrow that makes men old.
jfk
 
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Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:22 pm

Postby Golyadkin » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:39 pm

Okay, what poet did you steal that from? :wink:
Seriously, I think it's that good. Keep it up!
"I love mankind, it's people I can't stand."
-Linus van Pelt; Peanuts

"I have yet to see proof of my own mortality."
-Me

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golyadkin.proboards3.com
www.fyodordostoevsky.com
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