Ah, it's like a high when I finish one...

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Ah, it's like a high when I finish one...

Postby dks » Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:34 am

I wanted to share. I just finished it not a moment ago...there's a glint of an allusion here.

Warm and Alive

My hand is warm and alive,
And almost fain,
This fulgent band
Still crushes close joy.

It will drop loose, fan freely,
Spreading tips to touch you
Again and again—
Full swell
In the moon’s
Secret summer shade.

You, and only you
Made me know
How diaphanous and divine
It truly is
To soften so much frozen earth
Under chilling years of girdled snow.
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Postby Saturn » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:18 am

'Tis a beauty as always Denise :D

Another of your pearls carelessly dropped in our way.
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Postby dks » Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:10 pm

Saturn wrote:'Tis a beauty as always Denise :D

Another of your pearls carelessly dropped in our way.


I'm a sponge to your flattery.
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Postby Richard » Tue Oct 10, 2006 9:22 am

Is it something to do with a wedding ring ? Glistening as freshly wrought.
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'The High'. From a male standpoint is akin to giving birth while finishing a 3D crossword.



yet again I fail to communicate effectively due to the errant emoticons

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Postby dks » Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:01 pm

Yes...a ring...good analysis.

You and those bum-rushing emoticons, Richard! :lol:
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